Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Just Make It All Fine... Before You Are Gone..

Orginal ONE:-
Sometimes when I watch trees sway,
From the window or the door.
I shall set forth for somewhere,
I shall make the reckless choice
Some day when they are in voice
And tossing so as to scare
The white clouds over them on.
I shall have less to say,
But I shall be gone.


MY VERSION:-
before that reckless choice u make...
just watch forth the last breath u take...
before ur voice becomes the word...
let it be flowed and thus be heard...
n let the sun shine on you...for one last time...
before you go... just make it fine...



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